Fangala the Flying Feline

Actually, emma, I think this is a very nice poem! The important thing is that is comes from the heart; when you spill your passion into your poetry, it rubs ...

Yay! I'm the first to review! This was amazing. And don't worry about the length, because it flowed so well and so fast that I didn't even notice. You have ...

Hello, oh Curly one. :D Good job; this is exciting and moves at a fast pace. Might I make a structural suggestion? This could be made even more exciting if ...

Nice job. And what a way to end the chapter! God, now I can't wait to read chapter two. But as for this chapter, here's my critique: I thought you ...

Wow, I love this! Especially the gray sweater. How can you say you're not an artist? Okay, now I'm definitely going to read the story.

Hiya! Well, I think all the grammar stuff has been covered already, so I won't even go there. This was good, but it was a little hard to read because ...

Wonderful! Darling! Fabulous! This is so cute, and I really relate to this poem because it describes my hair in perfect accuracy. Curly hair is a blessing and a curse, ...

Wow, thank you so much for the reviews! To answer the questions that people have, James killed Miranda because they were all driving drunk one night, and James was the ...

Thank you, guys! More reviews, please? Please?

I loved this! And I've been to Veneta, because I used to live in Eugene, so I can totally picture the setting. This moved at a quick, breathtaking pace without ...

Hello, Autumn. Good start and an interesting idea. I agree with most of the stuff that your other reviewers said, and I won't bother with grammar, because I believe it's ...

Nice. Very nice. While I read this, I imagined you submitting it to a science magazine, which of course would drive the editors crazy. This is beautiful--the poet's science of ...

GAS (Guardian Angel Society) “Couldn’t they come up with a less offensive acronym?” I moaned. Eloise, who had also been in the car, playfully punched my shoulder. “I think it’s ...

Whoa. Evil six year olds. Fascinating. This is hilarious in a black sort of way. Interesting idea you've got there--going into the dark psyches of child stars. I'm not sure ...

Hi! Well, I really enjoyed this. I agree with Stella that this could be beefed up with showing-not-telling, but you've got a strong foundation for your character, so that shouldn't ...